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Article 12
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"JUST GIVE ME WHAT I WANT"
by Joe Robson
Dear
Webmaster,
Please excuse
the formal greeting but I couldn't find your name on
your Website.
I buy quite
regularly on the Internet, and I was drawn to your site by one
of your ezine ads. Your book 'How To Build The Perfect Website'
seemed just the thing I was looking for.
Boy did you
make it difficult for me!
I may not know
much about site building, but I do know one thing. If it's my
money you're after, you're in danger of starving to death!
When I visit
your site, please identify it's purpose. I find a headline on
each page is a great help but you obviously disagree The fact is
there were so many things on offer, I wasn't sure whether you
specialized in anything in particular.
And why didn't
you tell me who you are? I didn't expect a full biography but a
contact name and email would have been more reassuring than
webmaster@. It's so impersonal and adds to the distrust many of
us have about Internet marketers.
And why you,
and so many others, seem terrified to list a phone number
mystifies me. I can only assume you're afraid of being swamped
with complaints about poor service and sub standard goods. I may
be wrong of course, but I know many others feel the same way. It
re-assures us you see.
It was only
because I was distracted by a spilled cup of coffee in my lap,
that I waited around for your page to load. Even a 'no brainier'
like me knows that graphics should be optimized for fast
loading.
In fact I
would advise kicking them off your site altogether.
They certainly
did nothing to add to my experience. And those animated banners
gave me a migraine!
I'm known as a
very persistent person, and it's just as well I am. It took me
ages to find the page I wanted. It was the navigation. The
buttons were in different places on each page.
And they
weren't identified very well. I clicked on 'Products' 3 times
before I found the specific book I needed A site map would have
helped, but you didn't seem to have one.
Unless it was
the navigation problem again. I get impatient and easily
confused you see. And so does my computer.
It's system
isn't exactly bang up to date, but I've never been able to
justify the cost of upgrading it. Even though it's only 3 years
old it couldn't quite handle some of the 2nd millennium
technology you employ. Of course you may not mind losing the
'old fashioned' visitors, but there are lots of us around.
Another thing
that confused me was that my printer couldn't print out your
information. It was your tutorial on 'Professional Site Design'
that I found particularly interesting. The page looked really
attractive with it's white text against a blue background.
Because I found it impossible to read on screen I decided to
print it out.
I don't print
the background colors, so when I came to read it later the white
text didn't show up on the paper. Why is that?
Anyway, I
thought I would write to you and offer a piece of advice that
all successful on-line and off-line marketers have apparently
known for many years.....
FIRST give me
what I want. THEN I'll give you what YOU want!
Oh, by the
way. About that nauseating music.....
Do you play
requests?
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Joe Robson is
author of Make Your Words SELL! co-authored by Ken
Evoy. Joe and Tom Glander are Co-Founders of The Newbie Club
which is bulging with revolutionary Internet and PC Newbie
tutorials. CLICK ON OVER to http://www.newbieclub.com and look
at their very professional Affiliate Program. It's BIG! Joe's
Copywriting site is at http://www.adcopywriting.com
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